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Re: Umbrella
Umbrella By Summer Verse 1 He said " You can have everything" From shiny cars to diamond rings He said I'd be his queen And that I deserved a limousine ...
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Re: Break Up or Make Up?
I loved this song a lot, and even though it had some what!!! A song is from the heart, like poetry, so made up or misspelled words are okay. Also ...
Nov 25, 2007 -
Re: Her suicide note
I thought this had a lot of imagery, but it was too short and I want more. If this was a poem it didn't much qualities that a poem should ...
Nov 25, 2007 -
Re: Wolf Heart - Read me
Hey this is Summer, you've critiqued some of my writings. Well I loved this description of you story because I didn't read it. Lo Siento!!! but it sounds like it'll ...
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: Untitled
I really didn't read the whole thing. :oops: But I really liked some of the things I scanned. For example the content was really nice. A word of advice DesperateRomantic, ...
Nov 22, 2007 -
Re: The Chronicles of Pyra
Chapter 8 Flashback........ " This child is not right for our kind." a man said screaming at Sparla " Father this is a gift to the world. I feel that ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: The Chronicles of PyraChapter 7
Chapter 7 Lily was so distraught the rest of that day. She knew that the four most strong warriors would include Prince Moon the liar and she couldn't face him. ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: The Chronicles of Pyra
Chapter 6 Everyone at Cloud Caste was startled by the news everyone had questions but for some there were few answers. " We should fight them with our greatest army." ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: The Chronicles of Pyra Chapter 5
Chapter 5 Deep in the sea of Ceretorius was the Kingdom of Marina where Queen Aquan, King Neptusus, Aris and her sisters Aqua and Marius lived. It was a angry ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: The Chronicles of Pyra
Chapter 4 The next day at Eria was busy and bright everyone was getting ready for the huge school celebration at Cloud Caste. Lily woke up feeling happy and relaxed. ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: The Chronicles of Pyra
Chapter 3 Prince Moon of Skylark was pacing around his room thinking about how hard his life was. He had an arranged marriage to Princess Aris of Marina and the ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: The Chronicles of Pyra
Chapter 2 " James there's a baby in there somewhere she's the only survivor. Get to her before she dies." a firefighter shouted in fear James couldn't see through the ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: Pyra: The rise of the Phoenix Chapter 1
Chapter 1 Slowly the sun began to lower into it's red fortress for the night. The king watched it on top of a hill, waiting for darkness to come. When ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: In the Land of Harmony Chapter 1
Chapter 1 Francesca: A Drop of Sun Across the room he sits, like a drop of golden sun. His eyes like oceans, and his skin the soft color of caramel. ...
Nov 20, 2007 -
Re: Abandoned City
Abandoned City Chapter 1 War " Mom when do you think the war between Majesta and Cavadore will come to an end?" I asked hopefully " When Prince Scorpion cleans ...
Nov 16, 2007
